Look, is there a way for me not to flirt and not be flirted with by Lucian (the god) and other guys? From the first scenes, I'm forced to flirt and be flirted with by him, I try to "run" anyway, but there's no way! Honestly, it discouraged me. because I make the MC to be like me, and I can't see the MC ("me") flirting and making out with another guy. Thanks there! 🙂
It was great, until a part came where I had to create a so-called “pronoun”, to be honest, I was completely lost! I couldn't understand anything, it seems like it was written in Greek, what is this nonsense for? I've been playing choice games for a long time and I've never seen this disgrace in my life... and there are several grammatical errors in the game, EXAMPLE: when NPCs refer to the MC, they refer to him as "they" as if he were more of a person, but in this case the NPCs are addressing the MC, who in this case is just one. and some other spelling errors that I won't mention all of them, otherwise I'll need to write a much longer text than this one explaining... I just wanted you to correct these things, as it takes away the fun of the game.
i really enjoy the story but i kind of wish the RO was already locked at this point.. bc theres so many bugs. im not even interested in either of the 2 female RO but im forced to watch MC flirt or be flirted with by them and others. Lee suggesting that MC has been "pursuing" the dragon lady? like uh no sir I've been relentlessly trying to pursue Lucas, who you also tried to push Luna towards... and in that scene it feels like he does kind of flirt with them back completely forgetting all of MCs and his thing.. just weird..
This IF looks funny and creative, haha! I've been reading so many serious and bittersweet games that this one is going to be an interesting change. I'm curious, and I'm definitely going to read it!
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Hi author! I love the way you write and I hope you will continue this IF and your other IF that I'm reading.
This IF reminds me of the manhwa I'm reading "The Novel's Extra" (https://asuracomic.net/manga/1908287720-the-novels-extra-remake/)
Keep it up author 😘
hello I know this is very late haha
But I want to say thank you for the kind words
And please accept my apology for the delay and with grammars and errors
Found sort of repeating bit of text or is it supposed be that way?
You probably should take look at this variable. doesn't really fit in to the sentence "her" would work better.
save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/MH2SvPwE
List of pronouns set just for sake of information:
Should be "has returned"
I think only one of the replies should be here
"What MC says is true." :D
You should probably add a neutral line here:
Missing first letter
MC again
Look, is there a way for me not to flirt and not be flirted with by Lucian (the god) and other guys? From the first scenes, I'm forced to flirt and be flirted with by him, I try to "run" anyway, but there's no way! Honestly, it discouraged me. because I make the MC to be like me, and I can't see the MC ("me") flirting and making out with another guy. Thanks there! 🙂
It was great, until a part came where I had to create a so-called “pronoun”, to be honest, I was completely lost! I couldn't understand anything, it seems like it was written in Greek, what is this nonsense for? I've been playing choice games for a long time and I've never seen this disgrace in my life... and there are several grammatical errors in the game, EXAMPLE: when NPCs refer to the MC, they refer to him as "they" as if he were more of a person, but in this case the NPCs are addressing the MC, who in this case is just one. and some other spelling errors that I won't mention all of them, otherwise I'll need to write a much longer text than this one explaining... I just wanted you to correct these things, as it takes away the fun of the game.
i really enjoy the story but i kind of wish the RO was already locked at this point.. bc theres so many bugs. im not even interested in either of the 2 female RO but im forced to watch MC flirt or be flirted with by them and others. Lee suggesting that MC has been "pursuing" the dragon lady? like uh no sir I've been relentlessly trying to pursue Lucas, who you also tried to push Luna towards... and in that scene it feels like he does kind of flirt with them back completely forgetting all of MCs and his thing.. just weird..
Lmao why does mc still flirts with lucas even tho i picked a obv not interested choices kinda annoying 😕
sorry about let me check the codes. hays damn bugs.
both lucas and princess i have no choice but to watch my mc get all lovey dovey with them in ch2, is it like that or like you said cause of bugs?
Also don't worry your choices will not locked them as your Love choice. Sorry if its annoying still practicing and testing the codes
No pressure. Love your IF, keep it up💪💪💪
Thanks Friend 😃
its a bug I put a code there somewhere just need to test it again
This IF looks funny and creative, haha! I've been reading so many serious and bittersweet games that this one is going to be an interesting change. I'm curious, and I'm definitely going to read it!
Thank you for the kind words lovely Reader :)
Yooo this was actually fire to read. Despite the style not really being up my alley I found this super entertaining and really fun. Great work author!
Thank you for the praise, lovely Reader :)