Dragon's Edged

Found sort of repeating bit of text or is it supposed be that way?

You probably should take look at this variable. doesn't really fit in to the sentence "her" would work better. 

save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/MH2SvPwE

List of pronouns set just for sake of information:

Should be "has returned"

I think only one of the replies should be here

"What MC says is true." :D

You should probably add a neutral line here: 

Missing first letter

MC again 

Look, is there a way for me not to flirt and not be flirted with by Lucian (the god) and other guys? From the first scenes, I'm forced to flirt and be flirted with by him, I try to "run" anyway, but there's no way! Honestly, it discouraged me. because I make the MC to be like me, and I can't see the MC ("me") flirting and making out with another guy. Thanks there! 🙂

It was great, until a part came where I had to create a so-called “pronoun”, to be honest, I was completely lost! I couldn't understand anything, it seems like it was written in Greek, what is this nonsense for? I've been playing choice games for a long time and I've never seen this disgrace in my life... and there are several grammatical errors in the game, EXAMPLE: when NPCs refer to the MC, they refer to him as "they" as if he were more of a person, but in this case the NPCs are addressing the MC, who in this case is just one. and some other spelling errors that I won't mention all of them, otherwise I'll need to write a much longer text than this one explaining... I just wanted you to correct these things, as it takes away the fun of the game.

i really enjoy the story but i kind of wish the RO was already locked at this point.. bc theres so many bugs. im not even interested in either of the 2 female RO but im forced to watch MC flirt or be flirted with by them and others. Lee suggesting that MC has been "pursuing" the dragon lady? like uh no sir I've been relentlessly trying to pursue Lucas, who you also tried to push Luna towards... and in that scene it feels like he does kind of flirt with them back completely forgetting all of MCs and his thing.. just weird..